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I love the editing suggestion from Steve – rephrasing an accusatorial wrong ("you buried the lead") to a writing compliment ("this is so great, let's move it up!") It's a win-win-win for editor, writer and reader.

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Hi Sara, I couldn't agree more. Wouldn't it be great to be edited by Steve?

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Do you happen to know if Steve Padilla has a brother? I studied at CAL under an English professor named "Genaro Padilla." He told me back then that he had three highly successful brothers.

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I don't know. If you follow Steve on Twitter @StevePadilla2, you can message to ask him.

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What is a graf?

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Sorry, it's journalese shorthand for "paragraph." We also spell "lead" as "lede." In future, I'll be mindful that not every reader is a journalist. Thanks, Marianna.

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